Seasons: Haiku

Rating: 4.3
Spring: Haiku
Life awakening
Flower opens in the sun
A world is reborn

Summer: Haiku
Warm sun on the ground
A flower growing stronger
Life under the sun

Fall: Haiku
Darkening Shadows
Flower drifts to gentle sleep
The world is resting

Winter: Haiku
Blankets of cold white
Flower hidden from the cold
Life waiting for spring

© JPM 11/13/08
Thursday, November 13, 2008
COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 04 May 2018
A well thought out poem depicting the effects of the different seasons on nature. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Jim and do remain enriched.
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I would love to use your spring haiku for my calligraphy homework. It would not be used for commercial purposes and you will be credited. Thank you!
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Walterrean Salley 16 September 2014
A fine line of haikus. You've done a good job. Enjoyed each one.
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* Sunprincess * 26 June 2014
..........the flower is one of the most special creations of the cosmos....enjoyed...
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Greg Davidson 23 February 2013
I like them. It so so nice to see that poets still acknowledge the traditional form in more than just the syllable count. Beautifall images.
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Andrea Blodgett 05 February 2009
There is one line in it that has eight syllables instead of seven, it's the Fall Haiku and the second line.
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Mia Sovlade 24 May 2018
no it doesn't
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