Wednesday, February 4, 2009

Her Deception Comments

Rating: 4.5

I still love her with all of my heart,
But her decisions and actions have teared us apart.

What am i to say to her? I am so confused,
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Kelisha Mitchell 04 February 2009

I can't even put into words how awsome this poem is and so ironic for me because me and my boyfriend went through that problem ur describing 6 hours ago.............

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Delilah Miller 04 February 2009

The poem had a very even cadence to it when I read it out loud. I don't know if you did that on purpose, but it made the poem seem conversational and strained so nice job. It's never an easy decision, I imagine.

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