Her Halo Poem by Thao Anh Nguyen

Her Halo

Her, it's her
The halo rested atop her head
With her magnetic aura, her wits and skill
She has earned it, I must admit
And thus she's adored by many
They all flock to her bestowing self
Halos they have too
But hers radiates a precious glow

They all admire her speeches
Every word laced with drollness or knowledge
Just look at her, she's just perfect
Do they not care for the shadow she casts behind?
I watch the light that is radiated in front
Dear God, I pray someone take her place

She's horrid, she must be!
With her veil of superiority
I bet she has no need for the mere inferior
Why would she, her existence like that of a goddess?
The perfection she has sculpted brings me dread
Yet a monster she is not
I'm just a sinner and I speak ill

Oh to the Heavens I ask
I plead and I beg
Why must I be so undeserving of a halo?

Her Halo
Monday, October 30, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: angel,jealousy,sad
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Please don't be too harsh on this! I'm only a beginner, so yeah it's probably sorta wonky. I'm open to input and feedback, which includes critique on how I can express the emotions in this better or what wording I could use instead. Just, as I said, don; t be harsh about it please, thank youuu
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