I like the isolation of key words. Like when you used the word 'touchstones'. It caught my attention and immediately helped me to understand what those 'ideas' really symbolized.
'Mental patients.. some
are saints..
others were once timeclocking
gatelocking
electroshocking
psychiatrists'
My favorite part, I think. =D It showed the switching of roles...
'Sacred Silent Loving Acts
Are Their Only Speech'
This seemed the to sum up the entire message to me. This is just my enterpretation, however.
But, I enjoyed this piece intensely.
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I like the isolation of key words. Like when you used the word 'touchstones'. It caught my attention and immediately helped me to understand what those 'ideas' really symbolized. 'Mental patients.. some are saints.. others were once timeclocking gatelocking electroshocking psychiatrists' My favorite part, I think. =D It showed the switching of roles... 'Sacred Silent Loving Acts Are Their Only Speech' This seemed the to sum up the entire message to me. This is just my enterpretation, however. But, I enjoyed this piece intensely.