Sunday, June 22, 2008

Herald Heard The Hark Comments

Rating: 5.0

Herald heard the hark
After many many ages
herald heard his hark.
Afer eons his own song
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Saiom Shriver
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Machine Girl 22 June 2008

I like the isolation of key words. Like when you used the word 'touchstones'. It caught my attention and immediately helped me to understand what those 'ideas' really symbolized. 'Mental patients.. some are saints.. others were once timeclocking gatelocking electroshocking psychiatrists' My favorite part, I think. =D It showed the switching of roles... 'Sacred Silent Loving Acts Are Their Only Speech' This seemed the to sum up the entire message to me. This is just my enterpretation, however. But, I enjoyed this piece intensely.

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