Monday, August 20, 2007

Here Comes The End Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't cry for me, I loved my life
Cry for those who lived in strife
I've had my time and loved every hour
Sure there were times when at death I would cower
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RyuOh Kenshin 20 August 2007

Very good, it was well thought out, and rhyming was very smooth and simple

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Poison 9901 20 August 2007

I really like this poem alot, it flowed very well and the rhymeing was also good. Just a few typo, s but not enough to break the rythem. Very nicely done. 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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