Saturday, January 4, 2003

Heredity Comments

Rating: 2.9

More than a fleshly immortality
   Is mine. Though I myself return again
   To dust, my qualities of heart and brain,
Of soul and spirit, shall not cease to be.
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John Liddell Kelly
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Alison Cassidy 01 November 2008

A beautifully crafted iambic pentameter shapes this bitter/sweet poem about the turning wheel of life. The reader feels the fierce love in your voice. Your final line is superb. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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John Liddell Kelly

John Liddell Kelly

Airdrie, Scotland
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