Saturday, December 16, 2017

Hey Ho Comments

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Hey ho...
It's all my fault, as you know
I should have spoken, opened my eyelids
Confessed to my lover; my emotions
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James Morrison Steward
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CraigS 10 April 2018

Sounds like you really hurt someone and you're sorry. Hope you're on good terms now though. Great start.

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 December 2017

A great start with a nice poem, James M. S. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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