Hibiscus Comments

A touching write that uses the subject of Hibiscus to great effect in the description of how you view these delicate flowers and their appearance to your artistic eye of detail. The third and fourth stanzas are my favourite where your affection for this flower comes out the most detail with flourished embellishment with great effect. Your mother would be honoured in this work, and the respect you have for the art of your culture. Thank you for sharing it was a learned experience