Friday, August 29, 2008

Hidden Courage Comments

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Weak compared to anybody,
Quiet as a mouse, slow as a turtle, he goes.
Skinny bones, limp muscles,
A meek smile and a timid face
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Ahmad Shiddiqi 30 August 2008

interesting! I like the words, he’s strong at heart and will. keep writing! Could you read and comment on my poems? Thank you.

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