Jack Dylan

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High Expectations - Poem by Jack Dylan

Consume me, and end this pain
Remember none of life’s strain
Cover my skin with numbness
Depression will succumb to us

Put an end to this recession
And forgive my confessions
For I will never forget
Trying hard not to regret

Your scent so enchanting
Lost in a dream, soul demanding
Escape from reality
A surreal mentality

Floating away out of this cave
A journey with God, some even say
Id is alive with hands on the wheel
Time is our debt, which no one can steal.


Comments about High Expectations by Jack Dylan

  • (7/17/2006 1:28:00 AM)


    'Time is our debt, which no one can steal.' Wonderful Job... simply grand. (Report) Reply

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  • (7/12/2006 5:40:00 PM)


    Beautifully asked for release Jack, you have a wonderful poetic style, Tai (Report) Reply

  • (5/7/2006 7:28:00 PM)


    Careful, Jack, your gift is showing. Peeking out of the darkness. Great job! (Report) Reply

  • (5/4/2006 12:13:00 PM)


    Absolutly fabulous lines:
    Consume me, and end this pain
    Remember none of life’s strain
    Cover my skin with numbness

    Well done!

    Patriica Gale
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 2, 2006

Poem Edited: Sunday, August 6, 2006


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