Read careful gents
I am about to divulge a hidden secret
The secret list of what a lady finds appealing
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Oh to be a butterfly and flutter my wings by your check
To have you admire me as I glide by your beautiful smile
To land upon your shoulder and watch you breathe
Oh to hear your voice sweetly recite
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With pen in hand my mind begins to wonder
Circles and lines half written
Then your name appears
Next to I love you
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Come to me in twilights surrender
When the twinkling of the stars await their call
And the moon is to begin its glorious shine
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When we watched the maple seedlings fall and spiral down to the ground
We laughed and I told you they were helicopters
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Beneath the green and berry red
They flutter about
Making a melody with each wing strum
Magical lil’ creatures
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All I want for Christmas is to treat you as my wonderland
My finger tips to skate lightly across your chest
Hearing the music of a softly fine tuned band
I need you to be my holiday quest
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My mind reels with words of love, desire and passion
I try so desperately to grasp
lines and verses just something… to tell how I feel
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Luscious greenery growing strong
Tending and nurturing with much care
Before the harvest would be fair
Next trip it will require a bucket to be brought along
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His words glide like silk against soften skin
I am captivated by the thought wondering should I give in
Could this be a chance by the angels
Hearing a prayer for a heart that has always dangled
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Golden amber red slowly sailing to the ground
Nothing heard … just the sound of hope
Rustling in the breeze
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One step at a time
Carefully examining each path
As I walk the cavern of memories
Feeling the chill that comes deep from within
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Feather strewn shades of pinks and yellow
Against blue shades of eloquence
White billowing clouds splashed into form
A beautiful canvas for the eye
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His tender head upon my shoulder
My arms holding the greatest gift
My heart filled ….. complete
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Can you care for someone you have never met?
Do the stars still shine on a cloudy night?
Can your heart feel when you have never touch?
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Beautiful brown mixed with black and white
Eyes that sparkled with the call of going out into nature
Faithful and loyal, true friendship
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Oh to fly away were the fairies be
Were the flowers bloom and the forest tis forever green
Where beauty is all ye see
And in the day they crown the May Queen
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Gently my eyes open and I whispered
Thank you for I can see
My feet moving slowly one in front of the other
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In the beginning God created the heaven and the earths
It is said on the seventh day he rested
I believe he was not tired or’ the creations of nature and the world
But of the ones he placed here on earth
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Angel of hope come to me
Mend my heart with golden thread
Weave your healing all around
In and out through my soul
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Quote from Patricia Gale: 'A hopeless romantic, who should have been born in another time another place.' Patricia's 2007 book of poetry titled 'Ink From the Heart' recently published and available at www. publishamerica.com She has also been published twice in the Indiana Criteron. Her children, three daugthers and two sons have graced and blessed her with three healthy, handsome grandsons.Who are her pride and joy. 'Life only gets better when you become a grandparent.. makes having children all worth while' Patricia is a lover of the classics, nature and gardening. Making things grow with her hands is the most rewarding gift of all, to taste what you have grown with your own hands is a gift from God.)
110 %
Read careful gents
I am about to divulge a hidden secret
The secret list of what a lady finds appealing
A man who takes pride in the way he looks
But can not spend more time in front of the mirror than a model
Grooming is worth 30 %
His walk… must have confidence in it
No head hung low
Look us right in the eye
10 % on this one
Friendly but not to friendly, just a touch at first
A sensitive caring side
Please no over whelming machismo, it really is unbecoming
Strength, please no over emotional clingy types
15 % added for this
Chivalry the long dead art….
Open the door for her and no, automatic doors do not count
Show interest in her apparel
The pick up lines really are embarrassing
One’s like, did it hurt when you fell from heaven
Please you can not retract an awful line
Tack on 15 %
Remember her conversation, birthdays, and favorite things
Dig deep guys, find out who she is
15 % and possible more
It’s called making love, not a quickie, not a roll in the hay
Give passion and you shall receive passion
A gentle affectionate touch, holding and listen all the above is worth
25 %
110 % might seem like a lot but the old line still remains
Give and ye shall receive
P.S. Results may vary
(Please take no offence…Just a little light humor)
thank you very much for writing such a nice comment about my poem. It really meant a lot to me! Again, thank you.
PATRICIA JUST FINISHED READING YOUR POEM A MOTHER'S HEARTACHE AND I'M RIGHT IN THERE WITH YOU.. SOMETIMES MOTHERS CAN DO NOTHING RIGHT, IT SEEMS I'M ONE OF THEM. I HAVE BEEN T RING TO READ ALL OF YOUR AND DOC'S POEMS. YOU HAVE WRITTEN A LOT. TAKE CARE AND GOD BLESS. LOVE JO
Patricia, Your poetry is fantastic, Loving, compassionate, truthful and even funny sometimes. You are one talented writer. I love reading your poems. Take care.
Patricia is an astounding poetess who brings forth many happiness and a sense of inspiration to us all. I know I find it very difficult to turn away from any of her pieces! I often find myself in a major familiar zone while reading her work, which adds to the exquisiteness of how special I find her. Patty darlin'... thank you for being such a treasured gem of a friend to me and to us all. Love you girl! Love and Honor, Kristin
What a beautiful poem “butterfly dreams” it’s just the way I feel about someone special. Thank you
Patricia, I am really, really enjoying your poetry. Very moving. I hope you'll continue writing...
Geez, this lady writes so well and she looks great too. Brains and beauty do work together...
You are one such talented poet maam. Your simple words makes the thought of your write very meaningful, it touches the hearts and souls of most of us. Your poems simulate the real world wherein people live in various lifestyles and experiences. You are my epitome.
PATRICIA JUST FINISHED READING YOUR POEM CONFESSION FROM ONE HEART TO ANOTHER AND I CAN'T GET OVER HOW MUCH ALIKE WE SEEM TO BE. I LOVED THE POEM AND IT BROUGHT BACK SO MANY' MEMORIES TO ME OF SOMEONE I LOVED SO MUCH. THANK YOU. I'M STILL TRYING TO READ ALL OF YOUR AND DOC'S POEMS, SLOW PROGRESS, BUT I WILL MAKE IT, BUT THIS ONE REALLY HIT ME IN THE HEART AND SOUL. THANKS JO
Wow... that was so nice... really... something so difficult to explain written in such simple words... that was really nice...