High School Epic Poem Comments

Right from the start, Nicole's poem, The Not so Epic, Epic Poem brings out a smile. The poem itself is straight to the point and described all the subjects on the list, though others were intertwined with others. She establishes from the beginning that high school was a blur to her; however soon after, she picks out two particular memories that happened during her high school years. It would have been a bit more interesting for her to write in how high school had been a blur to her, maybe via use of just firing off particular events that could have stood out to her. Among those, she could've spoken about the two memories she describes within the poem - a sort of precursor. Otherwise, the only major issue that stands out is a technical issue, with usage of the wrong word/spelling mistakes. Everything else is perfectly fine, blunt and straight to the point in true Nicole style. She covered all her bases and though her last line is a bit confusing, I'm chalking it up to the difference of class years.