High School Names Comments

I love this...has being in high school, , , every body has a label of a hoe or a fake i hate it and wish it change but then i think of it and say its only high school

I think the first section would be better in verse form to compliment the rest of the poem, but otherwise, you write a very poignant statement on what 'Bullying' actually is. My boy has had this problem with regard to his fathers death some years ago, the same boy then and again now. I and the school at the time, should have dealt with him more severelly, hence saving my boy the equally painful distress of his repeated, lower than low bully tactics. Bullying of the nature you describe, I have fought against it seems, all my life. Not 24/7 luckily because most people do grow up eventually. I think you could develop the title, giving it more power and readership attraction. It starts way before High school imo. Thanks for sharing it. Tai