Him Poem by ciara long

Him



i love him but
i dont know y

is it the way he looks
at me, but that cant be
he dont even notice me

i love his hair
the way he walks
and talks but he
could care less about
me

why him out of all
the boys? why me
out of the one he
loves?

will we ever be,
mayb ill never see
the day when you
say you love me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ch J Satyananda Kumar 17 June 2009

Caira, it is not the age to think of love. I can understand, you long for some one to care for you. But first of all, study well, get some job and then there are many boys who would be ready to love you and care for you. Without proper education and financial backing it would drive you further into problems if you try to find a boy friend or start a relationship. God bless you.

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