His were the arms that lifted me up,
And his that dropped me down,
His were the ones to hold me tight,
With my fingers knitted into his crown.
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Wow this is such a personal and powerful piece Zoe and there's so much hurt in your words. The sudden and abrupt ending is perfect and you've written from the heart here and that puts you beyond any kind of criticism. I think it's beautiful.
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Wow this is such a personal and powerful piece Zoe and there's so much hurt in your words. The sudden and abrupt ending is perfect and you've written from the heart here and that puts you beyond any kind of criticism. I think it's beautiful.