Apurva Jain

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Hindi Poem- Astitv - Poem by Apurva Jain

Aaj Aasuon Se Dil Bheeg Gaya,
Par Sharir Par Ek Boond Bhi Na Pad Payi Thi,

Aaj Duniya Ki Bheed Se Kayi Aage Nikal Aayi Mai,
Par Vahi Ki Vahi Khadi Reh Gayi Thi,

Aaj Kamyabi Ko Kadam Chumne Par Majboor Kar Diya,
Par Rishto Ki Raho Se Hi Juda Ho Gayi Thi,

Kayi Sathi Pa Liye Maine,
Par Sath Hi Na Pa Payi Thi,

Royi Thi Main Par Aasu Sukh Gaye The,
Hasi Bhi Thi Shayad Par Aatma Jhuthi Ho Gayi Thi,

Har Labz Par Apna Naam,
Har Jagah Apne Chehre Apni Aawaz Ko Pa Liya,
Par Khud Khokhli Ho Gayi Thi,

Jisne Apne Dum Par Bade Bado Ko Maat Di,
Aaj Khud Ki Nazaro Se Maat Kha Gayi Thi,

Jise Aaj Puri Duniya Dekhne Ko Tarasti Hain,
Jane Vo Khud Kaha Kho Gayi Thi..........


Comments about Hindi Poem- Astitv by Apurva Jain

  • (12/26/2009 10:08:00 AM)


    Kayi Sathi Pa Liye Maine,
    Par Sath Hi Na Pa Payi Thi,

    Royi Thi Main Par Aasu Sukh Gaye The,
    Hasi Bhi Thi Shayad Par Aatma Jhuthi Ho Gayi Thi,
    ...............
    very nice apoorva...
    aisa hai ki yeh feeling to ham sab ki life mein aati hai..but very few of us are able to portray it on a piece of paper..and you did it..
    congrats
    you have got a regular visitor now..i am sure i would like your more poems...
    hope to see some more soon..

    all the best..
    10 from me..
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  • (12/23/2009 8:57:00 AM)


    astitva means............ ummmmmmmmm
    existence, identity, reality
    well in this context it means my true self..........
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  • The Jesus Of Suburbia Is A Lie (12/22/2009 8:35:00 AM)


    OMG! ! ! What a poem....

    Maan na padega...kya likha he....lol...
    It's an awesome....though i still dont know the meanin of ASTITVA....
    Pls tell me in english what it is....
    But i enjoyed ur poem.....
    Well done small poetess....hats off....
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 20, 2009



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