Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Hold Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was a girl, who lived a fantasy.
She was terrified, never showing her true self,
just her mask.
Her whole life she lived as a facade.
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Adelaide
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Roseann Shawiak 24 October 2015

A totally and intense description of how others treat us throughout life because of their own insecurities and doubts, feeling so bad about themselves that they beat others up with their mouths, telling them lies until they believe it themselves. What a cruel and inhuman way to treat others in life. Love this poem, you have depicted this problem well in your poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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