Hold My Hand, Let's Climb Poem by Carlos Steven Flores

Hold My Hand, Let's Climb

Rating: 4.3


Don't look back there's nothing to see
Climb the mountain and we will be free
Take my hand and I'll help you to the top
I can't do it by myself so please don't stop
After all everything is at least plausible
So hold my hand and I'll show you it's possible

Give me your all, I wont let you fall
With so many obstacles in the way
I'm here to stay, to help you make it to the next day
You and I are a team bound together by a dream
Hold my hand and we'll get through no matter how hard it may seem

Everyday it gets harder to climb
The product of trying for such a long time
Give me your hand please help me through
I can't do it by myself I need you
Just about everything has a chance
So hold my hand and show us both we can still advance

Take my all, just don't let me fall
So many obstacles in our path
Stay by my side help me overcome life's wrath
You and I are a team bound together by a dream
Hold my hand and we'll get through no matter how hard it may seem.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this during a tumultuous time during a relationship when I was much younger. The mountain is just a representation of problems we faced. In the beginning, I was just urging to please let me help you get past the past lol. However, through the middle of the writing you can see I'm losing hope, but still a little hopeful. In the beginning I was trying to help, by the end I needed their help.
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Carlos Steven Flores

Carlos Steven Flores

Santa Monica, California
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