Friday, January 12, 2018

Holding Space Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's the final countdown
the days are passing by,
each one getting shorter,
the sun lower in the sky.
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Samantha Meyrick
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Chinedu Dike 12 January 2018

Such beautiful rendition of words in a sad story of loss, embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A well encapsulated piece of poetry elegantly penned from the heart. Death is a bad reaper - often going after unripe fruits. May The Lord Almighty be your strength. Thanks for sharing Samantha.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 January 2018

The memories I hold dear; your tiny, perfect face. In my heart for you my son there will be eternal space. such fine sentiments of sorrow and loss....... sooo fine.. thank you dear poetess. tony

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