Thursday, June 5, 2014

Hollow Pumpkin Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was hollowed out ready for Halloween party
Naughty kids drew me a smiling face with sharp knife
Unknowing the viscous juice oozed from the blood of my body
I saw my organs being cut in half With exultant cheering, thrown away
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Sammi Lee
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Jazib Kamalvi 16 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Sammi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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