Sunday, June 29, 2014

Hollow Trophy Comments

Rating: 5.0

The cleaner's bill is staged for the idle hours spoiled
On your horticulture manicurist
Who sell you on the idea of installing a portable moat
As a means of ensuring you have positive Feng shui
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Kevin Patrick
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Elena Sandu 24 July 2014

Dynamic feel, your poem, reads like a speed race between the future and the past, to find us swimming in the irony of present times...Naah the trofee may be hollow only for some eyes, for those who can feel these wonderful lines the trophy is full, with waves of thoughtful flair, thank you so much for share.

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Elena Sandu 24 July 2014

Dynamic feel, your poem, reads like a speed race between the future and the past, to find us swimming in the irony of present times...Naah the trofee may be hollow only for some eyes, for those who can feel these wonderful lines the trophy is full, with waves of thoughtful flair, thank you so much for share.

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