rainnig outside, the sky is gray there's not much light.
the house is quiet, family has left me
my feelings begin a riot, killing me from inside
my hope is fihgting back, but my the desire to quit
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WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Im speech less, lol. That was a very good poem, it captured my attention an held on 2 it 2 the end. well done.
Outstanding writer, your ability to bring such intense visual imagery is of brilliance...I've never been captured by such a powerful piece as this. Truly remarkable poet.10/10 Best wishes to you Jon