Perveiz Ali

Freshman - 923 Points ((08-02-1988 / Srinagar, j&k)

Honest Love - Poem by Perveiz Ali

Honest Love
When first I ventured into your flowery space,
My imagination ran wild as I gazed in your face.
I pledged my heart as your presence baptized me,
Your character and worth I did see.
Wisdom and wit grounded in strong faith,
Words from your beautiful lips, so honest and straight.
Innocence and purity unsurpassed on this plain.
Thy persona so sweet, was right as rain.
Care and concern for others on display,
Your guidance enlightened me along the way.
By your side I wish to remain eternally,
My love and faith in you grows exponentially.

©Perveiz Ali

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Honest Love by Perveiz Ali

  • Gajanan Mishra (9/3/2015 7:17:00 AM)


    my love and faith in you, good.. (Report) Reply

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  • Ramesh T A (9/3/2015 12:19:00 AM)


    The qualities that kindle love is ingrained in the lady the poet describes well in this poem needing two more lines to make it a sonnet good! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 2, 2015



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