Friday, June 6, 2008

Hope Comments

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like a rose in its full bloom
like the bright night of a full moon,
like grass with tiny dew drops,
like the harvest of the maize crops,
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Greenwolfe 1962 22 August 2008

This remind me of my own poem on hope. It says the same thing sort of. This poem has the repetition device as memory, but I'm not sure this one will work as well. It is the kind of poem that must be recommended as well as not forgotten. I'm a little worried about it succeeding in that endeavor but we shall see. GW62

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