navami patil


Hope - Poem by navami patil

Hope - Hope
We never know when a beautiful thing once..becomes a junk....
We never know when being blessed turn out to be... Poision..
We never know when.once visioned dream become blank..
Just a small mistake can ruin everything....
Promise to stay by my side..
Yes to earn the peace one needs life teaches you leasons and reminds everyone that its not always a beautiful path of rose carpet...but thorns added.
Remember every step we passed.... Wait for good day.
Hopes! ! ! !
Keep that high always.

Topic(s) of this poem: hope

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

to keep going no matter what odds we face...keep looking up up up

Comments about Hope by navami patil

  • Rajnish Manga (9/19/2015 9:54:00 AM)


    I love your poetic style which on the face of it appears to be down to earth but it reveals great truths about life like they were quite obvious. Thanks:
    We never know when a beautiful thing once..becomes a junk....
    Just a small mistake can ruin everything....
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    Navami Patil Navami Patil (9/19/2015 10:04:00 AM)

    thank you so much sir all your appreciations will make me write

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 19, 2015



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