Tori May


Hopelessly In Love - Poem by Tori May

that smile
the one that makes me melt
the one that brightens my day
the one only she can create

those eyes
the ones that can win any argument
the ones i get lost in
the ones that catch me every time

those lips
the perfect ones
the ones i dream of kissing
the ones that say my name angelicly

that boy
the one i love
the one i couldn't satnd to lose
the one thats not mine

when he catches me staring
atleast i know he's looking back


Comments about Hopelessly In Love by Tori May

  • Dark Piccaso (10/15/2009 10:14:00 PM)

    Ah, love. I hate it, but hey champ don't give up. Keep fighting until you suceed, or until your hearts broken beyond prepare. XD
    Sorry, i'm a downer I know it. Great poem though.
    ~Dark Picasso.
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  • Ying Escalona (10/14/2009 8:18:00 PM)

    nice piece Tori, but not hopeless at all....wait... when that piercing stare becomes a seductive wink :) (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 14, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, February 5, 2010


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