House With The Porch Light On Comments

George, I don't write song lyrics, so I really won't say much about this except it seems all over the place as far as rhymes and rhythm go. With a tune you might get away with lines like nce in a gloomy day. If you want to be a better POET, you need to read lots of good contemporary poetry (Billy Collins, Mary Oliver, etc.) If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Thanks. Yrs, JC