How Would You Feel? Poem by Ashley Ostrander

How Would You Feel?

Rating: 4.5


How would you feel if you lost everything that meant something to you is now gone?
You lost your dog or cat, maybe a family member or lost your job.
Lost your home, or whatever you lose.
How come? Why does the world have to be so mean?
You feel so lonely inside that your screaming so loud but no one even turns to look at you.
You walk the halls in school wondering if someone hates you, or even if someone wants to talk to you.
You lost all your friends, your boyfriend, everything!
How would you honestly feel?
Well you would feel just like me!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Georg Hersch 13 September 2006

We have the same last name. Also, my only advice is to read your poem on your sixtieth birthday and see if it means the same to you.

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***** ********* 08 April 2006

And me Ashley, but you get over it and make new friends and get new boyfriends! Believer me. but we have to suffer to be able to empathise with others distress, so understanding that will help you to understand the vacant onlookers.This of work could be tidied up a little and maybe three verses formed from it to make a really neat little poem, with a lot to say on the nature of humanity, or not! but that is just a thought, it is your work.9 from Tai

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