Human Vision Poem by Jonathan B,,

Human Vision



our sight runs far,
but chained so close,
unable to reach stars,
a simplicity overdose.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eveline Mendes 09 December 2009

wow i say...b4 a read it, i saw 4lines and thought 'what? ' then well, i read and WOW. short, simple and true. nice.

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Sameera Sameer 16 September 2009

short but Extremely fantastic! ! loved it keep it up

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Jackrabbit krjs 09 July 2009

I love it, you managed to make this poem mean soooooo much with so little words! ! ! keep writing.

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