Saturday, October 11, 2008

Hungry For Glory Comments

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Aiming for glory,
Bring glory to your name
But that doesn't make sense
stepping others goal
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Kish Jane
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Ency Bearis 11 October 2008

a nice concept..selfishness sometimes boomerang to self as greediness is bad to society..nice theme... just only one comment on this format..need to had a meter to make this poem good..as this is like a prose as it written..keep on writing.. Ency Bearis

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