Hurting Poem by Kayla Duf

Hurting



So this is where we are now,
Is this it, where you want off,
Your gonna leave me here all alone,
Why, I don't deserve this,
I should have known to never trust you again,
All you want to do is hurt me,
More and more, I can't take that,
I don't want to hurt, I want happiness,
I want peace, and love, in my life,
But with you there,
That's something, I'll never achieve,
I don't know why, but your not you,
I won't let you in this odor anymore,
Give me my heart back,
So I can put it back together,
And you can never hurt it again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 27 May 2009

hmmm so emotional... and well written..'give me my heart back'' sweet line.. and the whole poem is very impresssive an intgeresting... touching my heart... but my poetry doesnt touch your heart as i think... your short comments shows... while I asked for long comments to know more... best of luck the best friend

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