Hurting In The Dark Comments
sometimes, i just feel like my heart will collapse..
like my eyes have exuded my soul..
like after all of my effort, my pain will relapse,
and i'll fall back into that dark hole..
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Very Powerfull write Brittany! ! ! Your words convey the feeling of helplessness and despair, pain and the desperate need of relief from it all. I have several writes that exude such emotion... wow! Very Good Ink! ! ! ! ; -) -Kelly.
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3/14/2026 11:41:14 PM # 1.0.0
You describe this dark Place so vividly in a share of sad rhyme. Well written