Sunday, February 16, 2014

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What is ‘I’?
A speck of dust riding air.
What is ‘I’?
A raindrop sinking in a churning sea.
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Praveen Wilson
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K.c. Ford 16 February 2014

Well done, but too repetitive. Could be better if you choose to find other ways of expressing What is I? Success with your work Praveen.

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