Wednesday, December 17, 2008

****i Am A Doll, But I Can Cry ***** Comments

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Dont be sad but you are not as beautiful as me
look at me:
my face is ostrich egg shell
my eyes are iranian turquoises
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negar shahnouri
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 December 2008

You're a livin doll who needs love..........love that eradicates your tears...of hunger and thirst.....for the loved ones.Nice piece baby.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 December 2008

Extremely inveterated write, young lady...and mucho intriguing, as well. The craftsman i will assume is he/she who built the doll, and thus became her creator...Your alludence to your god, and hers(the doll) being one & the same is very astute....as one must submit to the fact that it was God, who created the craftsman, who ultimately created the doll! Smooth penning, Neggar. Liked this much... FjR

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