I Am Broken Poem by matt hartwell

I Am Broken

Rating: 5.0


what was i to you?
just a good memory?
did i have any effect on you at all?
was i fooling myself the whole time?
You have broken me like a child and his toy.
You picked me up and toyed with my emotions.
Making me believe all your lovely notions.
I could feel that we were just going through the motions.
You broke me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tracey Wynn 23 June 2009

Very interesting way of writing this. You were able to keep the concept of being broken and express it well.

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