I Am Broken Poem by matt hartwell

I Am Broken

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what was i to you?
just a good memory?
did i have any effect on you at all?
was i fooling myself the whole time?
You have broken me like a child and his toy.
You picked me up and toyed with my emotions.
Making me believe all your lovely notions.
I could feel that we were just going through the motions.
You broke me.

Tuesday, January 13, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,memory
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tracey Wynn 23 June 2009

Very interesting way of writing this. You were able to keep the concept of being broken and express it well.

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