Friday, September 19, 2008

I Am Dead Comments

Rating: 3.8

I am back to say you that I am dead
I am not joking and I am not mad
Look at me there is no skin on
I am simply a white skeleton
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Aditya Pratap Nayak
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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 September 2008

'Do not cry and do not dial to me I am a past you can see I came here to say that I am dead I am not joking and I am not mad.' Wonderful, very nice. Very touchy.

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Kesav Easwaran 25 September 2008

a lamenting poem on love...good one, Aditya...nice rhythm and few good rhymings...give you ten

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Danambatha, India
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