Wednesday, December 11, 2013

I Am Gonna Change. Comments

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I look into the mirror, I don't like what I see,
because the person on the other side is not really me.
I don't see the person who I have always seen before,
The person I see now, is fighting an internal war.
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Jake MacMillan
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Colleen Courtney 11 December 2013

I really like this poem. Can so relate now that the aging process has started. I like how it alludes to how you're seeing the outside of yourself, but also maybe how you're feeling on the inside. Well done Jake!

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Colleen Courtney 11 December 2013

I really like this poem a lot. Can't help but relate as the aging process as started. Like that it alludes to both what you're seeing on the outside and how you feel when looking inside yourself. Well done Jake!

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