Saturday, June 12, 2010

I Am Not Yet Shattered! Comments

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You cut my wings and demanded not to fly
You pulled me back, insisted not to touch the sky
You fastened my lips, forced me nothing to say
You as well trapped me by jamming my way
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Mahalaxmi Naidu
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Akshay Srinivasan 12 June 2010

well written.....great meaning.....awesome poem...10/10

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Ayesha Rahman 12 June 2010

A great piece! i loved every word which u wrote!

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Mahalaxmi Naidu

Mahalaxmi Naidu

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