Thursday, February 7, 2008

I Am The Ugly Duckling Comments

Rating: 5.0

The one bird who did not, could not,
Fit in
My mother and brothers laughed
At me
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Nick Oldberg
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trash kid 15 November 2020

Did you know the true ending is that the swans got shot down by a hunter

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Mary Gordley 09 February 2008

Oh it is a painful place to be, until you realize as you have that you were always destined to soar. All the best to you and thanks for sharing so beautifully.

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Beautiful reinterpretation of an old tale, wonderful use of that tale to heighten the emotionalism of this piece.

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Frank Cannon 07 February 2008

You have taken wing to graceful flight. Stunning inded.

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