Sunday, February 1, 2015

I Beg You To Stay Comments

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I only feel weak, but your arms are strong around me
where you heart beats, is where I lay my head and sleep,
but when you are gone, I lie awake and weep.
My breath drowns when your lips brush mine.
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JulietDanielle Everson
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Chinedu Dike 01 March 2015

Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry with profound spiritual force. It is also whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and may leave without warning, even after careful nurturing by one of the couples. For the bliss of love to endure, it needs commitment from both parties. I like the articulation and penning of the poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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