Monday, January 19, 2009

I Belive Some Where She Is Also Waiting For Me Comments

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while having walk on the road one night
i found a person standing on the right
she was alone with eyes filled with tear
i wondered whats the matter why she is here
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VaRuN JaIn
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Kanika Gupta 20 January 2009

dil toh pagal hai....... the rhythm, of ths poem is too cool....

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Mahfooz Ali 19 January 2009

Bhai......... agar mil jaye to mujhe bhi bata dena.........

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Mahfooz Ali 19 January 2009

Yaar Varun.....main to darr hi gaya tha ki kya india mein aisa hota hai kya? Agar aisa hota to main 24 ghante sadak pe hi khada rehta......... main yeh poochne hi wala tha ki uska address bata do...... agar main yeh poem aakhir tak nahi padta....... heheheheheheheheheheheheehehehehe.lolzzzzzzzzz....... Very nice poem......... more interesting part was the suspense u created and maintained till tehe end........ SUPERB......... WAQAO.....OOOOO.......OOOOOO

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Tanay Pathak 19 January 2009

Really this is a nice one man keep it up

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