Monday, June 30, 2008

I Cannot Live Without Him Comments

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Overwhelmed by impatience; reading letters
from him, time has stopped, minutes take hours
and hours take ages to pass, I can’t wait anymore,
I can’t stand the noise of the clock and the sound
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Louise Tredoux
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Colin J... 28 August 2008

The sense of longing is very sad... Great poem... Colin J...

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Tanya Stanford 26 August 2008

I completely got a sense of how you feeling with this one. What an impactful poem. Can feel your Anxiety and emotion so powerfully in this poem.

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