Wednesday, February 12, 2014

I Cannot Promise Comments

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I can not give you everything
coz you are my all
I can not give you the moon and the stars
coz you are my moon at night and my brightest star
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Eleonor Santiago
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Khairul Ahsan 24 June 2016

It's a wonderful poem! How can you promise him/her anything, when he/she is: 'You are my all, my love my life Forever with you, I am in heavens delight.. ' The poem ends nicely with the above two lines.

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