I Cant See Poem by Danny REBELCHILD McGinnis

I Cant See

Rating: 5.0


when i sit and talk to her
i never really see
she always there listing to me
me and her were like besties
i love this girl she so sweet to me
i dont know how we meet
and i dont really care
because right now she here
shes more then a friend
and more then anything
ill protect till the end
and to the end we will see
everybody tells me were perfect
but i dont see it
we hold hands when we need it
and back off to belive it
she laughs at my jokes that are so stupid
frowns when i say that i gotta leave her
smiles when she sees me in my goofy sun glasses
and rubs my belly when i flex it
i tickle her and chase her around
spin in cirles till we fall down
but i cant see that she crazy over me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 02 May 2011

Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery. Great stuff. A perfect...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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