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I Cant See - Poem by Danny REBELCHILD McGinnis

when i sit and talk to her
i never really see
she always there listing to me
me and her were like besties
i love this girl she so sweet to me
i dont know how we meet
and i dont really care
because right now she here
shes more then a friend
and more then anything
ill protect till the end
and to the end we will see
everybody tells me were perfect
but i dont see it
we hold hands when we need it
and back off to belive it
she laughs at my jokes that are so stupid
frowns when i say that i gotta leave her
smiles when she sees me in my goofy sun glasses
and rubs my belly when i flex it
i tickle her and chase her around
spin in cirles till we fall down
but i cant see that she crazy over me

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  • (5/2/2011 1:39:00 PM)

    Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery.
    Great stuff.
    A perfect...10
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2
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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 2, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 3, 2011

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