Emily Reid

I Don'T Deserve You...

I live and love as lonely as a dark cloud. I feel myself slipping in to a dark place. All I have accomplished is hurting my love.

I will sit alone and eat alone. Everything reminds me of the one I loved truly and almost lost. I can't see myself anymore! I am lost, alone, and crying. My love means nothing and is nothing for I am nothing so I am forced to rely on the one I love, who loves me for only he can set me free and sever this depressing bond I have with death. I must go to him cry to him tell him of these dark things that roam the mind of his young love!

He is the only one who can see through my disguises. The fake smile, giggles, and happiness. He is the only one who can set the tragic story of me into a happy tail of love. So what now? Do I sit and what pondering at the chooses I will soon have to make?

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 27, 2010
Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 12, 2010

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  • *_sakura ~daisy_* (1/27/2010 6:28:00 PM)

    im going through this to....your words speak a painful truth yet a silent happiness.....i can feel all the pain...pondering walls of thoughts....trust...i too almost lost mine, and i found that i could only trust him in my dark times..he was the only one who saw through me and was there to be support and i felt loved...and cared for and even together you hurt them without meaning to.....because when they see the pain and suffering in your eyes it breaks them inside as if you too saw their pain....it puts a break in you and all you want is to free them....and free yourself to just be happy and with the person you love....great poem: p 10++++

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