Wednesday, June 10, 2009

I Feel Betrayed Comments

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I feel betrayed the way I loved
And gave my heart away
It's like a slap to stop my stride
To say please walk away
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Bradley Lester
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Marieta Maglas 10 June 2009

you very consciously select ideas and set them per stanza to kite up the topic, easy to follow all through..nice poem..10++

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Bradley Lester

Bradley Lester

Western Cape, Cape Town
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