Wednesday, June 30, 2010

I Hate That I Don'T Hate You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I hate that you left me
I have that I fell for you
I hate that your smile haunts
I hate that you died
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Jordyn Heal
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Brendon Carey 26 March 2011

This really brings out the raw emotions that you feel. I know how you feel and I could'nt have displayed it better.

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Mia Perez 28 January 2011

i loved your poem, you could feel the twisted emotions.

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