Friday, May 30, 2008

I Just Can'T Let Him Go… Why? Comments

Rating: 5.0

This lie's become sort what a part of me
For months, we’ve played this or his game
but I acting like it doesn't hurt me
Each time I hear the resounding of his name
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Pam Fraser
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Will P. Litter 02 June 2008

Always a pleasure to come by your pages of poetry and read your heart. Very deep, and wonderfully worded.

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Bonnie Collins 30 May 2008

Oh this is sooo tender and filled with so much hurt... I can relate so well to the feelings here, and you pened them so well. The reader can actually sence and feel the pain...AFTER ALL THIS TIME..... IT is so true, and I am 61, and you know, I can say the same AFTER ALL THIS TIME....... Very good I trully enjoyed this... A 10! ! Bonnie

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