Tuesday, July 22, 2008

I Lay Down Comments

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All books should begin
With sunlight, with rain,
With jovial violence, with her lips parting:
A cliché, a motif,
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Robert Rorabeck
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Stacey Haislop 22 July 2008

Bret, this poem just swirls with beautiful phrases and words and thoughts. I would not have room here to tell you individually what I find in this poem's lines so lovely. You have captured passion splendidly and I cannot wait to read more of your work...Stacey

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Robert Rorabeck

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