Thursday, May 13, 2010

I Lay On My Back. Comments

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I lay on my back.
Arms stretched out,
Like I’d fallen off a bike
Or was a drunken Christ.
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stephen roe
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Sherri Coulter 03 June 2010

I easily visualize her performance upon your heart....10/10

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Hans Vr 27 May 2010

Short and strong I can see the picture and feel the rain Thanks for sharing this in a poetic way

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